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SAT Free Practice: Improving Sentences

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Directions: In each of the following sentences, part of the sentence or the entire sentence is underlined. Choose the answer that best expresses the meaning of the original sentence. If you the think the original is better than any of the alternatives, choose (A). Your choice should produce the most effective sentence—clear and precise, without awkwardness or ambiguity.

1. Hockney's most arresting Pop Art works have been produced at his home in Los Angeles, he moved there from his native Britain in the 1960s.

(A) Los Angeles, he moved there
(B) Los Angeles; he moved there
(C) Los Angeles, but he moved there
(D) Los Angeles and he moved there
(E) Los Angeles he moved there

2. Knowing that you should practice a healthier life style and doing it are two different things.

(A) doing it are two different things
(B) to do them are two different things
(C) to do it are two different things
(D) doing it is two different things
(E) by doing it is two different things

3. Although many of the items on the menu were quite affordable, neither the salmon or the Cornish hens was offered at a reasonable price.

(A) or the Cornish hens was offered at a reasonable price
(B) or the Cornish hens is offered at a reasonable price
(C) or the Cornish hens were offered at any reasonably price
(D) nor the Cornish hens were offered at a reasonable price
(E) nor the Cornish hens was offered in a reasonable price

4. Steering the ship deftly through the channel, just above the captain a seagull flew.

(A) just above the captain a seagull flew
(B) a seagull flew just above the captain
(C) a seagull was flying just above the captain
(D) the captain noticed just above him a seagull flew
(E) the captain noticed a seagull flying just above him

5. The son of a blacksmith, Auguste Escoffier imbibed the scents and flavors of his native Provence, and these are the sensory delights that were included in his simplified French cuisine.

(A) these are the sensory delights that were included
(B) the inclusion of these sensory delights was
(C) these sensory delights having been included
(D) his inclusion of these sensory delights
(E) included these sensory delights

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